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January 25, 2009
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2009. 1. 27. 10:19
I met my friends. The beginning of the meeting was cheering to the friend named "Jinhoung". We ate some sashimi of tuna. there was talking about the lasest news.
But i had showed my resume, they censured me. In short, there was no characteristic about me, no outline and no story about corporation.
The resume has some important point.
First, the reader can image me. they can says a word about me. My resume couldn't that.
Second, that has my weakness. And how to make up for my weakness. In HomeShopping Ad, they said like that. Three strong point and one weakpoint. and said how to make up.
Last, show how to make profit. it's not about me. The corporation will make profits with me. And explan the method.
Next, I will write more good.
But i had showed my resume, they censured me. In short, there was no characteristic about me, no outline and no story about corporation.
The resume has some important point.
First, the reader can image me. they can says a word about me. My resume couldn't that.
Second, that has my weakness. And how to make up for my weakness. In HomeShopping Ad, they said like that. Three strong point and one weakpoint. and said how to make up.
Last, show how to make profit. it's not about me. The corporation will make profits with me. And explan the method.
Next, I will write more good.